The First Time I SawThe First Time I Saw...
This is a new and [hopefully] improved version of a story I have written. Any critique is requested and hoped for.
A cold mist... Dancing about my face... Kissing my cheeks lightly as delicate fairie wings...
... Where am I?
Now spread yourself, formless, across the area above me. Look down to see my journey throughout these strange events and watch, listen, as I unfold my tale to you. You see I move to get up.. What is this beneath my hands? It's clear and smooth. It feels like marble... it glitters with stars that go on forever. As if I am lying upon a glass that shelters the heavens themselves. As I struggle to hoist my body upright, I leave fingerprints. Traces of myself that disappear as quickly as I could see them.
When I am steadily on my feet, I notice I am wearing a surprisingly beautiful array of garments, a sort of which I have never seen.
It is a lovely, deep purple, loose fitting dress that flutters to an end about my knees. Layered and ruffl